tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456971920210651577.post7718037263184740096..comments2024-02-25T12:22:59.842-06:00Comments on A Catholic Citizen in America: Steve Jobs, Jospeh Maraachli, and "Reproductive Health:" My TakeBrian H. Gillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13209697542675181894noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456971920210651577.post-69471719267517235532011-10-12T10:19:53.061-05:002011-10-12T10:19:53.061-05:00Brigid,
Fixed, and thanks!
I changed the "m...Brigid,<br /><br />Fixed, and thanks!<br /><br />I changed the "missing a word" thing sentence, although it actually is a construction that's occasionally used: not often, though. As you said elsewhere: "awkward sounding."Brian H. Gillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13209697542675181894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6456971920210651577.post-11425047107345040522011-10-09T09:26:28.027-05:002011-10-09T09:26:28.027-05:00Missing a word: "killing babies seems a nice,...Missing a word: "killing babies seems a nice, caring thing to do."<br /><br />Extra contraction: "Canadian government that's doesn't want"<br /><br />Grammatically correct, but awkward sounding: "I take some solace in a genocide's unpopularity among America's establishment."<br /><br />Which church? "Church is opposed to treating people as if"<br /><br />The Friendly Neighborhood ProofreaderBrigidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03796317915330760325noreply@blogger.com